4. Choose the revision that corrects the run-on in the following sentence: People are living longer, the minimum age for Social Security benefits should be increased.

A. People are living longer the minimum age for Social Security benefits should be increased. B. People are living longer, the minimum age for Social Security, benefits should be increased.
C. People are living longer, so the minimum age for Social Security benefits should be increased.
D. People are living longer so the minimum age for Social Security benefits should be increased

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Answer 1
The answer is C. People are living longer, so the minimum age for Social Security benefits should be increased.
Answer 2

Final answer:

The correct revision for the run-on sentence provided is Option C, which uses the conjunction 'so' to connect the two independent clauses into a single coherent sentence.

Explanation:

To correct the run-on sentence, 'People are living longer, the minimum age for Social Security benefits should be increased,' an appropriate conjunction or punctuation is needed to join the two independent clauses. The revision that corrects the run-on sentence while maintaining proper sentence structure is:

C. People are living longer, so the minimum age for Social Security benefits should be increased.

Option C introduces the conjunction 'so,' which effectively joins the two related ideas into a single, coherent sentence. Options A and D are still run-on sentences because they lack appropriate punctuation or a coordinating conjunction. Option B introduces commas that create a non-standard and confusing sentence structure.


Related Questions

I wouldn't say he's the nicest guy around, but I've seen him behave not unkindly before.

these is the senyence

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If you are telling us to revise the sentence, one error is that there is a double negative. 'not' and 'un' would cancel each other, and the revised sentence 'I wouldn't say he's the nicest guy around, but I've seen him behave kindly before.'
I don't think this is a sentence. the last part doesn't make sense. It should be but I've seen him act unkindly before.

Someone says, “there is a strong positive correlation between the number of firefighters at a fire and the amount of damage the fire does. so sending lots of firefighters just causes more damage.” explain why this reasoning is wrong.

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The reasoning that more firefighters cause more damage assumes to correlate that somehow the fire spreads with more firemen and women present. In fact the complete opposite is true. The more firefighters, the more people are there to rescue, handle the blaze, provide cleanup, etc.

The act of slowly investigating a passage of literature to understand its imagery and meaning is called _____.

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The act of slowly investigating a passage of literature to understand its imagery and meaning is called  A summary.

The act of slowly investigating a passage of literature to understand its imagery and meaning is called close reading.

Though earth may not have willed catastrophe
The latest of new creatures was the serpent.

The word catastrophe includes a Greek root strophe that means _____.

self or same
twisting or turning
distant
measure

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Its B. Twisting and turning, hope this helps :)

What is an authority?

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It is a person or an organization that has the power to make decisions or give orders. Examples might include: the President, the government, etc.


8. Choose the correct form of the verbs to be and to have in the following sentence:
Hassan ____ most productive when he _____ several hours at a time to focus on his work.

A.is … have
B.are … has
C.is … has
D.are … have

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The answer is B. If we input the answer into the sentence it makes the most sense and it is more consistent in verb tense then the others. 
"Hassan is most productive when he has several hours at a time to focus on his work"
Hi 

The correct answer is C. is......has (3rd person singular BE and HAVE)

Hassan is most productive when he has several hours at a time to focus on his work.

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Mr. Utterson the lawyer was a man of a rugged countenance, that was never lighted by a smile; cold, scanty and embarrassed in discourse; backward in sentiment; lean, long, dusty, dreary, and yet somehow lovable. At friendly meetings, and when the wine was to his taste, something eminently human beaconed from his eye; something indeed which never found its way into his talk, but which spoke not only in these silent symbols of the after-dinner face, but more often and loudly in the acts of his life. He was austere with himself; drank gin when he was alone, to mortify a taste for vintages; and though he enjoyed the theatre, had not crossed the doors of one for twenty years. But he had an approved tolerance for others; sometimes wondering, almost with envy, at the high pressure of spirits involved in their misdeeds; and in any extremity inclined to help rather than to reprove.
"I incline to, Cain's heresy*," he used to say. "I let my brother go to the devil in his quaintly 'own way.'" In this character, it was frequently his fortune to be the last reputable acquaintance and the last good influence in the lives of down-going men. And to such as these, so long as they came about his chambers, he never marked a shade of change in his demeanour.
No doubt the feat was easy to Mr. Utterson; for he was undemonstrative at the best, and even his friendship seemed to be founded in a similar catholicity of good-nature. It is the mark of a modest man to accept his friendly circle ready-made from the hands of opportunity; and that was the lawyer's way. His friends were those of his own blood or those whom he had known the longest; his affections, like ivy, were the growth of time, they implied no aptness in the object. Hence, no doubt, the bond that united him to Mr. Richard Enfield, his distant kinsman, the well-known man about town. It was a nut to crack for many, what these two could see in each other, or what subject they could find in common. It was reported by those who encountered them in their Sunday walks, that they said nothing, looked singularly dull, and would hail with obvious relief the appearance of a friend. For all that, the two men put the greatest store by these excursions, counted them the chief jewel of each week, and not only set aside occasions of pleasure, but even resisted the calls of business, that they might enjoy them uninterrupted.
*The biblical story of Cain and Abel is a story about two brothers who gave offerings to God. Abel’s offering was accepted by God, but Cain’s was not. Jealous, Cain killed his brother. When God asked Cain where Abel was, Cain said, “Am I my brother’s keeper?” By saying this, Cain implied that what his brother did was his own business. (Genesis 4:1-16)

1. Question: Which line from the text suggests that Mr. Utterson placed greatest trust in the people he had known for many years?
A. "No doubt the feat was easy to Mr. Utterson; for he was undemonstrative at the best,"

B. "For all that, the two men put the greatest store by these excursions, counted them the chief jewel of each week,"

C. "His friends were those of his own blood or those whom he had known the longest;"

D. "And to such as these, so long as they came about his chambers, he never marked a shade of change in his demeanour."

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C. "His friends were those of his own blood or those whom he had known the longest;". Option C. is the line with the suggestion that Mr. Utterson placed the greatest trust in the people he had known for many years.

This line directly suggests that Mr. Utterson's closest friends were either blood-related ("of his own blood") or those whom he had known over a long period of time.

In other words, Mr. Utterson is a person who values long-term relationships and trusts people he has known for many years.

Janice is preparing a presentation for her co-workers about writing effective business documents. So far, she has a list of four characteristics.

Which of the following characteristics should not be on Janice’s list describing effective workplace writing?


Workplace writing is neatly formatted.


Workplace writing avoids addressing important points and facts directly.


Workplace writing is primarily informative or persuasive.


Workplace writing anticipates and answers readers’ questions.



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The answer would be B.) Workplace writing avoids addressing important points and facts directly.

The reason being is because this answer would be a good setting to think or write, however the other answers would not be appropriate.

The characteristic that should not be on Janice's list describing effective workplace writing is the second one:

Workplace writing avoids addressing important points and facts directly.

When writing effective documents, the ones related to business and others related to any subject, it is essential to address important points and facts in a direct way. This is the key of the understanding for the reader.  

Read the excerpt below and answer the question.

I left the house in bad humor and walked slowly to school. (“Araby” from Dubliners, p. 3)

From this sentence, both the reader and the boy know that _____.

a. he is filled with turmoil and is confused
b. he is dreading an examination
c. he is angry with Mangan’s sister
d. he is annoyed with his uncle

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From this sentence, both the reader and the boy know that he is filled with turmoil and is confused (option A). It might be inferred that he needed to get out of the house because that mood was not good. He might have figured this out after his uncle response to his idea about going to the bazaar in the afternoon. 

Answer:

A. He is filled with turmoil and is confused.

Explanation:

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Which statement expresses a similarity between Mathilde and Della?

Neither of them are rich.

Both of them are divorced.

They both love to play piano.

Both of them are housekeepers.

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i think the answer is A

Which best analyzes the purpose of headings and subheadings in an informational text

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Headings and Subheadings can help the reader figure out what the main idea of the passage is and how the information is divided.

Answer: The answer is "A" i got 50 freaking percent

Explanation: I took one for the boys :D

Fred’s idea of healthy eating is to have a double cheeseburger without putting any salt on it. The primary purpose of this sentence is to a. inform. b. persuade. c. entertain.

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The answer is A (inform)

What is one reason subplots are used in novels?

A) to distract the reader from the main plot

B) to develop the novel’s theme in more depth

C)to add irony

D) to show that the writer can create a complex story

Best answer will get brainliest:)

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The answer is B. I took the test.
The answer is B. To develop the novel's theme in more depth

Which of the following is an accurate statement about the theme of a story?
A.) It is the subject of a story.
B.) It is usually found early in a story.
C.) It must be the only theme in a story.
D.) It can teach a lesson.

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Theme is what you learn through out the story its normally found at the end So it would be D

Answer:

D.) It can teach a lesson.

Explanation:

A theme is a moral message or a universal lesson (usually expressed in one single sentence) that a literary work expresses about a topic/subject and that we can apply to our lives or to other literary works, therefore, themes can teach a lesson. Very often, this message is not directly stated in the story so we, the readers, have to figure it out.


Read the excerpt from "An Irish Airman Foresees His Death."

I know that I shall meet my fate
Somewhere among the clouds above;
Those that I fight I do not hate
Those that I guard I do not love;


What grammatical structure is repeated in this excerpt? Check all that apply.


the use of "somewhere," followed by an adverb


the use of an adverb to begin the lines


the use of "Those that I," followed by a verb


the use of a pronoun to end the lines


the use of "I do not," followed by a verb

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The grammatical structures that are repeated in this excerpt are C: the use of "Those that  I," followed by a verb, and E: the use of "I do not," followed by a verb. In both sentences, the repetition helps to create a contrast between the people who are being hated and the people of are being loved, and there is also a contrast between the actions love and hate.

The correct answers are C. The use of "Those that I," followed by a verb and E. The use of "I do not," followed by a verb

Explanation:

A grammatical structure is the structural organization of different elements such as verbs, adjectives, adverbs or prepositions that create different grammatical formations, in the case of poetry and other literary works these formations are often repeated to create rhythm or emphasize an idea. In the excerpt presented from "An Irish Airman Foresees His Death" the repetition of grammatical structures occur in two main cases, the first one is the repetition of the phrase "Those that I" in the third and fourth line each followed by a verb (word that expresses an action) which in the third line is "fight" and in the fourth is "guard". The second case in which the repetition takes place is the use of "I do not" also in the third and fourth line and equally followed by a verb which in the third line is hate and in the fourth is love. Thus, the grammatical structures that are repeated in the excerpt are C. The use of "Those that I," followed by a verb and E. The use of "I do not," followed by a verb.

Dunstan was sure Silas was dead and would have no need of the gold. True False

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The statement above is FALSE. 
When Dustan was coming back home in the night, he decided to check Silas Manner in order to borrow a lantern and to also use the opportunity to talk to him about borrowing money. When Dustan got to Silas house, it met the room empty with a meat cooking on the fire. Dustan wondered if Silas is dead, he then looked for his money, took it and went out of the house quickly. 
the statement is false

In a well developed paragraph of 5 – 7 sentences, describe the situational irony in “The Gift of the Magi”. How is this irony critical to the story’s theme?

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The ending of the story is laced with irony due to the unsuspected resolution that comes about from both characters having gone through the same sacrifices to obtain the gifts they so sorely wanted to give to each other. The fact that they can not use the gifts they received is secondary to the intention of getting the gifts in the first place. The theme of gratitude which the story represents is emphasized in this fashion. Both of them are grateful for what the other has done because they are trying to keep each other happy on Christmas. The point of the story is not about material satisfaction, but about a deeper spiritual satisfaction which comes from sincerely caring for others.

Answer:

The ending of the story is laced with irony due to the unsuspected resolution that comes about from both characters having gone through the same sacrifices to obtain the gifts they so sorely wanted to give to each other. The fact that they can not use the gifts they received is secondary to the intention of getting the gifts in the first place. The theme of gratitude which the story represents is emphasized in this fashion. Both of them are grateful for what the other has done because they are trying to keep each other happy on Christmas. The point of the story is not about material satisfaction, but about a deeper spiritual satisfaction which comes from sincerely caring for others.

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Which is a compound-complex sentence?
While they were walking on campus, Dwayne admired the buildings, and Michelle imagined attending classes in this beautiful place.
Daily exercise is beneficial to your health, therefore you must take several precautions to avoid injuries.
Our experienced tour guide, who grew up in the area, directed us toward some amazing local scenes.
The electronic merchandise was defective, as it had been severely damaged during shipment.

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a comma (,) is complex so it is:
compound
While they were walking on campus, Dwayne admired the buildings, and Michelle imagined attending classes in this beautiful place.
combine, too!
A compound-complex sentences contains AT LEAST TWO independent clauses and AT LEAST ONE dependent clause.
Having that in mind, the correct answer is A. While they were walking on campus, Dwayne admired the buildings, and Michelle imagined attending classes in this beautiful place.
Here, 'while they were walking on campus' is the dependent clause, 'Dwayne admired the buildings' is the first independent clause, and 'and Michelle imagined attending classes in this beautiful place' is the second independent clause.
B is incorrect because there are two independent, and no dependent clauses; C is incorrect because there are one independent and one independent clause; D is incorrect because of the same reason.

What are atrocities

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an extremely wicked or cruel act, typically one involving physical violence or injury.

Thank you. This definitely helped

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you know you can say that in the comments

what I can do in my time capsule

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You can put things that give information about your current time, or that hold great significance. You can put in some newspaper clippings from recent news stories, a popular book that's out right now, maybe even some old homework of yours. A very common thing to put in time capsules is money. I think a few pennies would be good for that.

I was in the National Forest with my camera. The day was crisp, and the leaves were turning gold and red. When I spotted the white-tailed buck, I froze. He wasn't more than 15 yards from where I was standing. The wind must have been right, because he kept on browsing the mossy ground. I lifted my camera very slowly. Carefully, holding my breath, I lifted the camera to my eye. Turning the focus ring, I framed the deer's head. Just as I was ready to press the shutter release, the buck raised his head. He was looking my way with wide eyes. Click. I took the picture. An instant later, the deer bounded away into the forest. He took off, but I had the shot. Today, the framed photo of that buck hangs above our fireplace. What season of the year is implied by the words you read in the passage? A. Fall B. Spring C. Winter D. Summer

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When, when you are describing that the leaves are different colors, it implies that the season would be Fall. Which would be A.

In three to five sentences, explain the connection between sentences fluency and proper use of conventions.

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Proper use of conventions is vital to sentence fluency: Proper use of conventions is how we obtain sentence fluency! The way a sentence is constructed determines how it will flow, therefore proper use of conventions is necessary for good sentence fluency. 

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Which excerpt is the best example of Frankenstein's Gothic nature?A. My cheek had grown pale with study, and my person had become emaciated with confinement.B. I will endeavor to resign myself cheerfully to death, and will indulge a hope of meeting you in another world.C. I knew well, therefore, what would be my father's feelings; but I could not tear my thoughts from my employment.D. I threw myself into the chaise that was to convey me away, and indulged in the most melancholy reflections.

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The best example of Frankenstein's Gothic nature is seen in the sentence:

B. I will endeavor to resign myself cheerfully to death, and will indulge a hope of meeting you in another world.

What is Gothic literature?

Gothic literature is a form of writing that has a lot to do with the supernatural and all such events. Events in the underworld are explored in these kinds of texts.

In the second option, we can see that the speaker talked about resigning himself to death and meeting the other person in another world. This is typical of gothic literature which talks about mysterious events and other supernatural things.

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it A. my cheek had grown pale with study .

What form does the poet of sailing to Byzantium take in the last stanza?

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I am honestly not sure because your options are confusing. The poet says in the last stanza that he doesn't want to take the form of anything natural - he wants to be made of gold, but not become a god, but rather a bird. He would like to be made into a golden bird and sing to the people around him. So I'm not sure what you should pick - he doesn't want to become a god, but rather a bird, but there is no mention of mechanics in the poem.

A work in which a satirist creates new, humorous lyrics for a well-known song would be an example of
reduction ad absurdum
caricature
sarcasm
parody

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This would be an example of a parody. According to the dictionary, a parody is "a work created to imitate, make fun of, or comment on an original work". This would include making humorous lyrics for a well-known original song. One example of a well-known artist who makes parody music is Weird Al Yankovich. 

Match the characteristics of nature as expressed by William Wordsworth to the lines quoted from his poems.

"A motion and a spirit, that impels / All thinking things, all
objects of all thought,"
"My heart leaps up when I behold / A rainbow in the sky:"
"Nature never did betray / The heart that loved her; 'tis her
privilege,"


Nature is a source of joy.
Nature is a source of comfort in hard times.
Nature possesses the attributes of a deity.

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1. "A motion and a spirit, that impels/ All thinking things, all objects of all thought," : Nature possesses the atributes of a deity. (A motion and a spirit, that impels= inspires; persuades; incite)

2. "My heart leaps up when I behold/ A rainbow in the sky:" : Nature is a source of joy. (My heart leaps up= happiness)

3. "Nature never did betray/ The heart that loved her; 'tis her privilege." : Nature is a source of comfort in hard times. (never did betray= always true)

Matching the characteristics of nature as expressed by William Wordsworth to the lines quoted from his poems are:

A. "A motion and a spirit, that impels/ All thinking things, all objects of all thought,"

Nature possesses the attributes of a deity.

B. "My heart leaps up when I behold/ A rainbow in the sky:" :

Nature is a source of joy.

C.  "Nature never did betray/ The heart that loved her; 'tis her privilege."

Nature is a source of comfort in hard times.

According to the given excerpt from the given poem by William Wordsworth, we can see that there is an attribution to nature which the writer uses.

In the poem, he characterizes nature as a:

Source of joyDeitySource of comfort

Therefore, he shows these attributes in the aforementioned lines to show how he views nature and how she has different functions.

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In Ernest Hemingway’s “In Another Country,” what is the primary reason the narrator received his medal
a-He rescued civilians
b-He saved the major.
c-He is an American.
d-He showed great bravery

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At the same time, there is a wall between Nick and the Italians because, as he says, he received his medal for being an American, and they actually performed feats of bravery to receive theirs

For being American, c


Why do writers often strive to write using more active-voice verbs and fewer passive-voice verbs? A. The passive voice is usually more emphatic. B. The active voice is more emphatic and usually makes it easier for readers to understand who is performing the action of a sentence. C. The active voice often puts the actor in a phrase after the verb. D. The active voice emphasizes the receiver of the action.

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Answer:

B. The active voice is more emphatic and usually makes it easier for readers to understand who is performing the action of a sentence.

Explanation:

Most author advice writers not to use the passive voice excessively. While this can be very useful in certain situations, it is better to use the active voice predominantly. This is because the active voice has several advantages over the passive voice. The active voice is more emphatic, which gives the reader a feeling of action. Moreover, the active voice places the subject at the beginning of the sentence performing the action. This makes it easier for the reader to understand who is performing the action of the sentence.

Ashley bought an expensive pair of jeans. Her friend got the same pair of jeans for almost $20 less. What tip could have helped Ashley? Use credit cards infrequently. Buy high-quality products. Think about what is most important. Look for bargains.

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The correct answer is:  Look for bargains.

Answer:

Option D. the tip that could have helped Ashley with her purchase would be to look for bargains.

Explanation:

A bargain is defined at something bought or offered for sale at a lover value than its original or usual price. The most probable scenario in which Ashley's friend bought the same pair of jeans that Ashley bought, but for almost $20 less is that she found the jeans on sale, after looking for bargains. If Ashley would have looked for bargains or promotions before buying the pair of jeans, she probably could have saved money.

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